The Merchant of Death: The Pendragon Series, Book 1 - D. J. MacHale

Stock story and characters, but still gripping.

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3
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Book details
  • Author:D. J. MacHale
  • # of pages: 374
  • Publisher:Simon & Schuster
  • Original Publication Date: 03/19/2006
  • Genre: Fiction - Fantasy
  • Paperback: $5.99
  • Publisher's Recommended Reading Level: 10-up
  • Read Aloud: 10
  • Read Alone: 11

Parents need to know

Parents need to know that there's a fair amount of fantasy violence here, and numerous killings by spear, arrow, and explosives.

Families can talk about the formulaic plot and stock characters. Can you think of other stories that follow this same formula? Also, the females in this story are all pretty much Amazons. Is this an empowering portrayal?

Message

Social Behavior:

Consumerism:

Milky Way bars, L. L. Bean, The Gap.

Drugs/Alcohol/Tobacco:

A teen smokes a cigarette.

Violence

Lots, some fairly grisly: a man runs in front of a train, another is eaten by a monster, fantasy battles, various human and creature deaths, by spears, arrows, etc.

Sex

One long, open-mouthed kiss.

Language

Mild, infrequent swearing.

Common Sense says

What's the story?

Reviewed by Matt Berman

When Bobby Pendragon is taken by his Uncle Press to an abandoned subway station in the Bronx, he discovers that he, like his uncle, is a Traveler, with the ability to ride "flumes" through space and time. Press takes Bobby through a flume to a world called Denduron, where an evil Traveler called Saint Dane is inciting war between the ruling Bedoowan and the virtually enslaved Milago miners. But almost as soon as they arrive, Press is captured by the Bedoowan and scheduled for execution.

Bobby doesn't understand anything of what's going on, and all he wants to do is go home. But, challenged by Loor, a warrior-Traveler from another world, he hatches a plan to rescue Press from the Bedoowan stronghold. Getting Press back, though, is only the beginning of stopping Saint Dane's plans for sowing chaos across the planet and throughout the universe.

Is it any good?

3

Author D. J. MacHale is the creator of such shows as Are You Afraid of the Dark? and Ghostwriter. His screen work has given him a shrewd sense of pacing -- though the book is overlong, it will keep young fans of the fantasy/adventure genre breathlessly turning the pages.

Told in the form of Bobby's journal, which alternates with scenes of his friends receiving and reading the journal, the story careens along entertainingly, and parts of it are quite exciting.

The downside of the video connection is that the characters are from Central Casting, and the plot follows the stock formula: Boy discovers unsuspected powers, is thrown into dire situation against madly evil enemy before learning about them, finds wise mentor and warrior comrade, finds reserves of courage and strength he never knew he had, saves the world, etc.

It's a good formula, as formulas go, but it does give the books a certain been-there-done-that feel, exacerbated by the bizarre refusal of everyone to explain anything to Bobby, an obvious and annoying plot device.

Still, it's plenty of fun, and young fans of the genre aren't looking for surprises anyway.

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Other Books in this Series
The Lost City of Faar
The Never War
The Reality Bug
Black Water
The Rivers of Zadaa
The Quillan Games

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Parents and kids say

All Reviews

There are 19 reviews.

5


Posted on 11/29/08 by rabix1294 Kid contributor, age 14

it kept me captivated and it made me have to read the rest of the seires

this book is amazing you have to get this book for your kid. boys would probly enjoy it more but it is so good that no matter what age you are youll want more and more I read the series twice the more you read it the better it is
5


Posted on 06/27/08 by TheBloke Kid contributor, age 16
5


Posted on 06/16/08 by thayer Kid contributor, age 13

Machales Writing Improves As the Series Goes On

This book is very good, but the series gets better as it goes on. I just finished the 9th book, Raven Rise, and OH MY GOD. It was probably the best book of ever read (yes better than HP, House of Scorpion, Fableheaven etc...). His writing has gotten so much better. From about the end of the second book onwards you feel an emotional attachment to the characters. I found it hard to stop reading these and finished the first eight in a month or so. Then i had to wait for the 9ths release. The idea behind the series is creative and original. I recommend this to anybody over ten, preferably under 20, after that, it sort of looses it's appeal.
3


Posted on 06/13/08 by EshInoBi Kid contributor, age 11

Recommended

If this were a book not of the series, I would definitely not recommend it. Yes, it was okay, pretty exciting, but it's pretty much nothing compared to the other books in the series, which is why I would recommend it, because you always need to read the first book, or else everything is very confusing. In this case, I think this book was a bit of run around, where is Bobby?! I'd still recommend it to someone looking for a series to read.
5


Posted on 03/23/08 by aarp Adult contributor
5


Posted on 03/04/08 by PendragonTheGreat Kid contributor, age 15

Best

This is probably the best book ever. If you've read this one you've probably read all of the one's that are out right now. Once you pick this book up, you won't be able to stop. Non-stop action, and keeps your heart pumping and you biting your nails.
4

Posted on 01/16/08 by Anonymous Kid contributor, age 12

A must read book for all kids

This book is great I would recromend it to anyone who is in need of a good book. There some violence (man gets run over by subway train, man gets eaten) but for the most part it isn't that violent. One minor charactor smokes a ciggarete but don't let that fact stop you from reading one of the better books of our generation
5


Posted on 12/28/07 by alext5bds Kid contributor, age 12

The best books ever

These books rock!! Th series gets better as it goes on. Violence is prevelent, and language is moderate. The story is wonderful. I would recommend this book for kids who don't like to read or like movies better than books, as this book is written like a movie. Funny thing too, the writer of "Pendragon" also wirtes scripts for "Flight 29 Down", "Ghostwriter", and "Tower of Terror".
3


Posted on 10/23/07 by yojenny Kid contributor, age 11
4

Posted on 09/09/07 by Anonymous Kid contributor, age 11

A Must Read Book For Ages 10+

It is a nice book except you do have to know your kid because there is some violence (man jumps in front of a train, man gets eaten by a beast)and there is some drug use but for the most part it is a good book for most kids.

See all 19 reviews >

Adult Reviews

There are 2 reviews.

5


Posted on 03/23/08 by aarp Adult contributor
5

Posted on 05/01/06 by Anonymous Adult contributor

Kids Reviews

There are 17 reviews.

5


Posted on 11/29/08 by rabix1294 Kid contributor, age 14

it kept me captivated and it made me have to read the rest of the seires

this book is amazing you have to get this book for your kid. boys would probly enjoy it more but it is so good that no matter what age you are youll want more and more I read the series twice the more you read it the better it is
5


Posted on 06/27/08 by TheBloke Kid contributor, age 16
5


Posted on 06/16/08 by thayer Kid contributor, age 13

Machales Writing Improves As the Series Goes On

This book is very good, but the series gets better as it goes on. I just finished the 9th book, Raven Rise, and OH MY GOD. It was probably the best book of ever read (yes better than HP, House of Scorpion, Fableheaven etc...). His writing has gotten so much better. From about the end of the second book onwards you feel an emotional attachment to the characters. I found it hard to stop reading these and finished the first eight in a month or so. Then i had to wait for the 9ths release. The idea behind the series is creative and original. I recommend this to anybody over ten, preferably under 20, after that, it sort of looses it's appeal.
3


Posted on 06/13/08 by EshInoBi Kid contributor, age 11

Recommended

If this were a book not of the series, I would definitely not recommend it. Yes, it was okay, pretty exciting, but it's pretty much nothing compared to the other books in the series, which is why I would recommend it, because you always need to read the first book, or else everything is very confusing. In this case, I think this book was a bit of run around, where is Bobby?! I'd still recommend it to someone looking for a series to read.
5


Posted on 03/04/08 by PendragonTheGreat Kid contributor, age 15

Best

This is probably the best book ever. If you've read this one you've probably read all of the one's that are out right now. Once you pick this book up, you won't be able to stop. Non-stop action, and keeps your heart pumping and you biting your nails.
4

Posted on 01/16/08 by Anonymous Kid contributor, age 12

A must read book for all kids

This book is great I would recromend it to anyone who is in need of a good book. There some violence (man gets run over by subway train, man gets eaten) but for the most part it isn't that violent. One minor charactor smokes a ciggarete but don't let that fact stop you from reading one of the better books of our generation
5


Posted on 12/28/07 by alext5bds Kid contributor, age 12

The best books ever

These books rock!! Th series gets better as it goes on. Violence is prevelent, and language is moderate. The story is wonderful. I would recommend this book for kids who don't like to read or like movies better than books, as this book is written like a movie. Funny thing too, the writer of "Pendragon" also wirtes scripts for "Flight 29 Down", "Ghostwriter", and "Tower of Terror".
3


Posted on 10/23/07 by yojenny Kid contributor, age 11
4

Posted on 09/09/07 by Anonymous Kid contributor, age 11

A Must Read Book For Ages 10+

It is a nice book except you do have to know your kid because there is some violence (man jumps in front of a train, man gets eaten by a beast)and there is some drug use but for the most part it is a good book for most kids.
4

Posted on 06/25/07 by Anonymous Kid contributor, age 14
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