Not enough action, Too corny, Too much sex, to much description of sex
It was corny, it is not for 12-16, its not for anyone. The author carefully slips in sex, immoral thoughts, etc..its trash, go read Artemis Fowl, Percy Jackson and the Olmypians, Eragon, or something else.
ITS NOT WORTH YOUR TIME!
I rather liked the choppy sentences. I did think the book was really sad. Although I enjoyed reading it, I'm not sure whether I would read it again. It's excellently written and it's very interesting.
I'd just like to say..whoever rated this first made it sound like the Book of Satan or something, and they were wrong. It was a great book. There is a bit of sex, but it's not lude. Violence is present, of course - it IS a book about preventing the end of the world, after all. I'd say wait until you're at least about nine or ten to read it, but after that it's really up to maturity levels.