August 8, 2019
Good Plot - Bad Layout
The entire book has the potential to be a great, thrilling comedy, however, the story wasn't told very well. As I started reading the book there were several ideas, organized sloppily. As I got submerged in the plot, I saw some rising themes in the background, BUT the entire story was too long to capture my attention. I think this story would have done better as a short, concise comedy, where the main story is easy to identify.