More to the Story

Book review by
Lucinda Dyer, Common Sense Media
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Warm Little Women update stars Pakistani American sisters.

Parents say

age 8+
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Kids say

age 7+
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Educational Value

Khan does a great job of explaining Bisma's illness and treatment in an honest, straightforward way that educates but never overwhelms readers with information.

Positive Messages

Putting aside your differences and working together helps everyone get through tough times.

Positive Role Models & Representations

Jam doesn't just talk about becoming a journalist, she's already started working toward being one. She's created a family newspaper and takes on a big job as the first seventh grader to be Features editor of her school paper. Jam also has to learn and face up to some hard lessons, when she makes a mistake and someone is hurt by what she's written. She's compassionate with her ill sister and donates something of her own to a charity that helps children with the same disease.

Violence & Scariness

"Hell" used once.

What parents need to know

Parents need to know that More to the Story, by Hena Khan (Amina's Voice), is an engaging re-imagining of Louisa May Alcott's Little Women. The modern-day storyline features four Muslim sisters from Atlanta, who are part of a football-loving, pasta- and ice cream-eating Pakistani American family. Narrated by 13-year-old Jamela (Jam) Mirza, the novel, like Alcott's classic, is about the bonds of sisterhood, the ties that hold families together through tough times, and a girl who has big dreams for her future. When one sister falls seriously ill, Khan explains her illness and treatment to readers in an accessible, honest, and sensitive way.

User Reviews

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Parent Written byhannah1991 January 25, 2021
I thought this book was pretty good, as I am interested in other cultures/religions. I decided to reread this because Hena Khan is a great author and believe th... Continue reading
Teen, 13 years old Written byGlactcusrulez October 10, 2019

Amazing, Funny, and relatable for girls and boys of any age, race or culture!

This a great book that I found both funny, relatable and I would most definitely recommend this to anyone that loves stories with a strong female lead, a loving... Continue reading

What's the story?

As MORE TO THE STORY begins, the Mirza family is celebrating Eid, which marks the end of Ramadan, the holy month of fasting for Muslims. For the family's four daughters (Maryam, Jam, Bisma, and Aleeza), it's the first Eid without their father, who's away interviewing for a new job. But things look up when their father's best friend arrives with his handsome nephew, Ali, who's just arrived from London and will be entering eighth grade at Jam's school. Jam's excited for school to begin, as she's been named Features editor of her school paper, a first for a seventh grader. She has big plans for making the paper more relevant to students and hopes this will be a big step toward her dream of becoming a journalist like her grandfather. When their father announces he's found a new job in Abu Dhabi and will be gone for six months, Jam and her sisters are heartbroken. Jam decides she'll write an article for the school paper that will make him proud, but the article goes terribly wrong. But all thoughts of Ali and Jam's problems at the paper are forgotten when one of the sisters falls seriously ill. 

Is it any good?

Readers who loved the March sisters of Little Women are sure to be delighted by this warm and engaging contemporary retelling featuring four Pakistani American sisters. The Mirza family of More to the Story is faced with tough fictional challenges that may be real life challenges for some readers:  a family member with a serious illness, a parent out of work and looking for a job.

Khan does a particularly good job at presenting the storyline about Bisma's illness. While never underplaying the seriousness of what Bisma faces, she takes readers step by step through her diagnosis and treatment, explaining things along the way in just enough detail to help them understand what's happening but never overwhelming them with hard-to-understand terminology.

Talk to your kids about ...

  • Families can talk about how many things the Mirzas in More to the Story have in common with your own family. Which of the Mirza sisters is most like you or one of your sisters? Do you have something special you like to do with your father or mother? 

  • Jam's parents won't allow her to use social media until she's in high school. Do you think this is a good idea? Or are her parents being too strict?

  • If your family had a newspaper like Jam's Mirza Memos, what stories would you put in the first issue?

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For kids who love South Asian characters and family stories

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