Serpent & Dove

Book review by
Mandie Caroll, Common Sense Media
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Wickedly fun witch fantasy has hot romance, magic, violence.

Parents say

age 15+
Based on 2 reviews

Kids say

age 13+
Based on 11 reviews

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The parents' guide to what's in this book.

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Educational Value

Serpent & Dove is set in a fictional French region with a pre-industrial historical feel. French phrases and cultural features lend authenticity.

Positive Messages

Proximity can lead to empathy. You don't have to change who you are to be loved. Admit when you're wrong, stand up for what you know is right. Defend and care for your friends, even when it's not easy to do so. Sexual consent is sexy. The story stresses the value of understanding and forgiveness.

Positive Role Models

Lou is an irreverent and plucky heroine. Reid is funny in his piousness and likable as he grows open-minded. Along with their friends Coco and Ansel, they show courage and selflessness in trying to protect innocent lives. Gender stereotypes are challenged in creative and refreshing ways. Main characters are assumed white, while secondary characters represent a range of skin colors.


Witches use magic to curse and kill, the Chasseurs use blades and daggers to kill witches at close range. Several attacks and fights that gruesomely described, with lots of bloodshed. A burning of a witch is described. 


Passionate kissing and references to past and desired sex. An explicit sex scene of intercourse between consenting, married adults involves some pain during intercourse, described as a "good hurt." 


"Ass," "damn," and "s--t" are used occasionally throughout the story.

Drinking, Drugs & Smoking

What parents need to know

Parents need to know that Serpent & Dove, by Shelby Mahurin, is the first book in a French-inspired witch fantasy trilogy. Lou, the snarky, fierce 18-year-old heroine, renounced the magic of her coven at 16 and lives as a thief in Cesarine. When she crosses paths with Reid, the town's top witch-hunting Chasseur, their worlds and the world will never be the same. Characters show great loyalty and courage in protecting themselves, each other, and innocent people. Empathy, shades-of-gray morality, and the dangers of extremism are recurrent themes. Sensitive and younger teens could be disturbed by the blood-soaked scenes of violence involving both magic and weapons (knives, daggers, hot coals, etc.). A smoldering opposites-attract romance storyline includes one explicit sex scene between consenting young adults. The scene involves some pain during intercourse, described as on the "fine line between pleasure and pain" and as a "good hurt." Parents may wish to read along with older teens and/or discuss this scene, especially in the context of consent and communication around sex. Occasional strong language includes "ass," "damn," "hell," and "s--t."

User Reviews

  • Parents say
  • Kids say
Adult Written byStudiousStudent October 15, 2019

Amazing Story, but...

This book is absolutely stunning! It kept me hooked and I did not want to put it down at all. However, this book does contain an explicit sexual scene! If you... Continue reading
Adult Written bysherricoop October 25, 2020


I don't have enough words to describe how much I loved this book! It was truly incredible. The only thing I think parents should be aware of is the amount... Continue reading
Teen, 14 years old Written byDuckyMcquack June 1, 2021


I loved this book so much, and yes it was rather explicit in some parts but I read A Court of Thorns and Roses when I was 11 so it’s really not that bad
Teen, 15 years old Written bySposs05 April 23, 2021

Take a bit of caution.

This book is really good and the romance is very swoon worthy. Take caution when letting your kids read. It contains quite a bit of violence, language and matur... Continue reading

What's the story?

SERPENT & DOVE centers on Lou, a rebellious witch who escapes from her coven, the Dames Blanches, on her 16th birthday. She renounces magic, and for two years, she survives by stealing what she needs. When a botched robbery puts her in a compromising position with Reid, the pious lead witch hunter, his boss, the archbishop, proposes they marry to protect Reid's spotless reputation. Lou accepts, figuring the best place to hide from the leader of the Dames Blanches, La Dame des Sorcières, is with the witch hunters themselves. Their mutual hatred dissipates as they get to know one another, and they begin to fall in love. However, Lou continues to keep her identity as a witch secret. When the truth unravels, a brutal fight for survival ensues that reveals the fate of their love, and the fate of their world at large.

Is it any good?

This richly-imagined, funny witch fantasy has complex characters, intricate systems of magic, and a captivating slow-burn enemies-to-lovers romance. It's a well-paced story full of intrigue and action. Lou's crass humor and refusal to be a proper lady will win over readers, while Reid's transformation from religious man of strict faith to principled but open-minded person is endearing. Well-developed secondary characters are just as charming. While all of the characters in Serpent & Dove start out in separate, warring worlds of morality, they eventually find their own and each other's humanity in the murky gray in-between.

The beginning suffers from vagueness about the systems of magic and an unproductive mystery about who is searching for Lou and why, though the story picks up and fills in gaps once Lou's past returns to claim her. Readers might be unsettled by Lou and Reid's first kiss (at the scene of a murder) and the pain and pleasure of the sex scene, though they aren't surprising given their hard-won relationship and personalities. The ending has a predictable plot twist, but it's easily forgiven as the intense battle for survival keeps the pages turning to the very end. Overall, this book is a stay-up-all-night joy to read, and fantasy-loving teens are sure to clamor for the sequel.  

Talk to your kids about ...

  • Families can talk about the violence in Serpent & Dove: How does fantasy violence differ from real-life violence? Does this affect how you feel about the violence in this book?

  • This book is marketed as young adult but will attract adult readers as well. Why do you think the publisher decided to market it to teens? What separates young adult from children's or adult literature?

  • How does sexual consent figure into Reid & Lou's decision to make love. How does Reid get consent from Lou? How does Lou get consent from Reid? What, if anything, surprised you about the sex scene?

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