Swordbird

Book review by
Matt Berman, Common Sense Media
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Child-author's debut will inspire kids.

Parents say

age 2+
Based on 4 reviews

Kids say

age 5+
Based on 6 reviews

A lot or a little?

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Violence & Scariness

Sword, spear, and arrow battles with injuries and deaths; slaves are whipped and mistreated; torture is mentioned; a bird is dismembered.

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What parents need to know

Parents need to know that this book, written by an 11-year-old, includes some violence, with injuries and deaths.

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Teen, 16 years old Written bylake April 9, 2008

Terrific book for kids all over the world

Out of the hands of the 12-year-old Nancy Yi Fan, the fantasy novel SWORDBIRD was published worldwide this February by one of the world's leading publisher... Continue reading
Teen, 16 years old Written byhallow hearted September 6, 2009

CRAPPY BOOK

All the parents say it is a great book for KIDS but the kids say it is a horrible book including me, just shows how much parents know about their kids...

What's the story?

An evil hawk named Turnatt attempts to rule the forest through brutality and intimidation. He captures birds to be his slaves and build a fortress, and he gets the bluejays and cardinals fighting against one another.

Once they realize they have been tricked, the jays and cardinals unite, but they are still not strong enough to defeat Turnatt and his crow minions. Their only hope is the legend of Swordbird, son of the Great Spirit, who can bring peace. But how can they find him?

Is it any good?

Taken as the work of a truly gifted 11-year-old, this is extraordinary. Any middle-school teacher would be thrilled to have a student do work like this, and Fan is certainly a budding talent worth watching for in the future. Is it fair to judge it the same way that novels by adults are judged? On that basis, it is sorely lacking: Stilted prose and sometimes embarrassingly awkward dialogue, a simplistic, derivative plot -- if this had been written by an adult, it is unlikely it would have seen print.

Does that matter? Probably not. Middle-graders will undoubtedly enjoy it (pleasure enhanced by knowing that a kid wrote it), and be inspired by its young author, maybe even to the point of trying some writing of their own. So no harm done, and maybe something to the good.

Talk to your kids about ...

  • Families can talk about the author's intentions. She has stated that this book grew out of her feelings about terrorism and the Sept. 11, 2001, attacks, and that it carries a message of peace. What do you think she was trying to convey? What is her message? How can a book filled with warfare be about peace? Also, how could an 11-year-old write a book like this? Do you have any ideas for a story?

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