Parents' Guide to

The Red Pencil

By Kate Pavao, Common Sense Media Reviewer

age 11+

Moving verse tale of girl's experience in Darfur genocide.

Book Andrea Davis Pinkney Poetry 2014
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Based on 2 parent reviews

Roksana Lim
Roksana Lim Adult
May 10, 2023
age 12+

Bad

This book was one of the worst books I have ever read. It was very boring, and I was always losing my interest in the book. In my opinion, the book was too slow and not worth reading. The form of poetry was different, but to some people, it was dumb. There was no need to use poetry for a book that wasn't even good. Some people don't like poetry and especially when the book is really boring. I recommended this book who like poetry and like a slow start.
niyahnizzy
niyahnizzy Adult
September 3, 2018
age 10+

The inner me

I thought this was a really good book also this could really give information about what’s going on now in Sudan darfur you should really take an interest in reading this

This title has:

Educational value
Great messages
Great role models
Too much violence
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What's the Story?

Amira Bright is a 12-year-old girl living with her loving family in the Darfur region of Sudan. In simple free-verse poetry, she recounts life's everyday ups and downs, such as watching her disabled sister learn to play soccer, sleeping with her sheep for comfort after a dust storm, or trying to convince her traditional mother to let her go to school. When the Janjaweed, brutal armed militias, attack her village, her father is killed and her beloved sheep burned alive. She walks with her mother, her sister, and other survivors to a dismal refugee camp, so traumatized she can no longer speak. But then an aid worker's special gift helps her unlock her pain -- and a dream for herself.

Is It Any Good?

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Parents say (2 ):
Kids say (4 ):

The free-verse style of THE RED PENCIL will help readers move through it quickly, but the novel is quite moving. At one point, a relief worker hands Amira a red pencil and a tablet of paper and Amira says, "A happy quick-beat drums in me." By telling the story of one 12-year-old girl, author Andrea Davis Pinkney helps young readers learn about the Darfur genocide and understand the devastating impact it had on families like Amira's.

Illustrator Shane W. Evans provides pencil drawings of Amira's world, drawing that could come from her own hand, adding more humanity to her story; one particularly powerful image, shown after the attack on her home, shows a delicate young girl with her hand on her heart, framed by a border of harsh scribbles.

Talk to Your Kids About ...

  • Families can talk about Darfur, where Amira Bright lives with her family. What do you know about the genocide there?

  • Why do you think this book is called The Red Pencil? How did the pencil change Amira's life? What do you think will happen to her next?

  • Have you read other books told in verse poetry? Why do you think the author decided to tell her story this way?

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